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Canon_D_111
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0 posted 2003-06-12 07:29 PM



Within a liquid pastel sunset sky


There am I


With a lilting breeze
Drifting upon the wind


There will I be


I am the moon
Full in July
Where Jupiter and Saturn
Fill my eyes

In depths of oceans
Dark and deep
Currents rise
To caress the earthen beach


This is me


When constellations guide
At night
And display their aurous light

Or a sun who shines
To warm this day
Leading you back
When you’ve gone astray

Shedding light upon destiny
There you find me

Within a willow forest
Where pixies dance
Their magical lore of fantasy
In legend carved of stone
As a grail sought for eon

I am your dreams
I bring you peace
The love you seek to understand
Is all in me
I am the comfort
To your dismay
I am that which fills all need


There you find me

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Magnus
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1 posted 2003-06-12 07:33 PM


Yes, from these thoughts..dreams are made..
some are written..

Thank You..

gyiel marlok
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2 posted 2003-06-12 07:34 PM


exceptional writing,what made you think of this
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3 posted 2003-06-12 07:43 PM


Wonderful write. Enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Canon_D_111
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4 posted 2003-06-12 07:56 PM


thank you;  This poem was written in answer to a question "who are you?" to try to explain me/I my soul aside from my ego I searched the deepest parts of myself to find this poem.
again thank you all for reading this is truely a wonderful place to be among friends...

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5 posted 2003-06-12 08:48 PM


how beautiful, the flow of this piece is really nice

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-06-13 04:39 AM


very matter-of-factly written...good stuff!
BlueEyedGirl
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7 posted 2003-06-13 09:32 AM


You know how I feel about this one...you are a true talent. Thank you for sharing it .
As we walk the journey of friendship together I am reminded there are no coincidences...
~Anna~

dgvarner
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8 posted 2004-01-21 10:33 PM


found this gem while skipping around some of the stuff i missed...boy was i away too long...lol....  

enjoyed this very much...hope to read more from you

hugs, g

"Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..."  B. Adams

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