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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Kick me into dust grey wrap me in sky beautiful black paint the background crystal clear so as not to distract from my decline fill the flood deeper abstract water winds restless as my mind lips wet for quenching the reason i laugh is my lack hope is delicate as nib once broken two lines of terrible fate erode papers cliff i am fallen now no hand signal enough to stop all that passes by. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
when we fall.. or are fallen... is when a friend comes along and offer a hand.. look around... you are surrounded by people here with there hands extended... you write some great lines here..and paint the feeling all too well..too real.... very well done. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
ron, youre right i know, so many of these people do make me feel better. you included. thankyou kindly sir, for all your lovely words. gem xxx |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Then smile..I'll get the band-aids and we'll fix that boo-boo up a bit... lol... ya need to talk? |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
i'm smiling now...lovely to know you care...i'm ok for now, if i need to talk m'friend, i'll let u know, dont you worry bout that. muchos love, gem |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Gemma, I'm offering a hand and an ear. If you need some help, drop me an email and I can listen. Sending smiles and hugs, Marti  Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
kick me into dust grey, solid |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Much better than nowhere man. he shared his with nobody, we however are graced by your words often..thanks |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Wonderful. You truly have an amazing way with words. I don`t know much about poetry I guess but I do know that that was amazing. *Allison* |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Gemma, my little friend.......remember that you really do have a lot of friends here....able and willing to give you a hand to keep you from falling. You also have a lot of people with ears willling to listen. You are a very big inspiration to everyone with your winning smile. Remember my e-mail address is right up there above my name.   Heart hugs to you, my friend, Ethel Mae [This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-12-2003 09:30 PM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
hey, this ledge can only deal with one blonde at a time......... feel this, been there, am there..... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
gemma: the reason I laugh is my lack . . . God that is so true . . . and ummm . . . we all better find a new ledge or we will be sinking into the ocean lol awesome as always xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gawd! this is awesomely sad |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
nowhere man popped 2 mind..im with them again sorry for my lack of creativity atm...im falling asleep.. If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh this just aches.. You have a wonderful way of expressing yourself.. Be good to yourself eh? ~Sending hugs and smiles your way, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Gemma, you know I really missed you. That was a great poem, of course that's what I expected before I even clicked on it. home, home, where I wanted to go -coldplay [This message has been edited by Wind (06-16-2003 03:09 PM).] |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
lizzzzzzzzzzzzzz! yayyyyyyyyyyyyy! (d'ya think i missed you too?) lol ahhh and she's quoting coldplay...my fave is...come up to meet you, tell you i'm sorry, you don't know how lovely you are. i'm going beserk. too much excitement for one evening i think. many thanks for all the gorgeous replies, you all make me want to pop with happiness! |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
Nice write is an understatement I loved this - as I can relate to so many parts & also because it was so well written looking forward to more from the land of beautiful poetry |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Coldplay is my favorite to! I love the pic, you're so pretty! home, home, where I wanted to go |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So many good lines in this this gemma~ Wonderful read, every single word of it! |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
hey..I really wanted this one in my library..but I forgot which one it was..i've been looking all through your stuff and i remebered two lines and i finaly found it! lol so its being bumped..like |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
 [This message has been edited by timothysangel1973 (07-23-2003 01:40 AM).] |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
Gemma... You know I lu..you girl. Uh..hope you find yaself. word to your mama. Jai |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I'll count to 100 and then come find you!!! Be well, be happy, be you!! |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Thankyou for your wonderful replies. I'm pleased to say, I don't feel like I'm 'nowhere' anymore. I'm here, afterall. well, kind of.  just.Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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