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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-06-12 04:29 PM



This is something me and Liam were arguing about last night.
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I'm sorry
For what I did to you
But sometimes
You have to get knocked
Back into your senses

I'm sorry
I blew up at you
But to know you have a
Female travel companion
To come get me
Doesn't seem smart at all

I'm sorry
Sometimes you don't think
Or if you do think it isn't rational
Any girl could tell you
What I have just said
Whether you like it or not

I'm sorry
You can't see my way
But I am sure
One day you will

I'm sorry
That I don't like the idea
Of you having a female travel
Companion
But any girl can tell you
That that can lead to trouble
And heartbreak

I'm sorry....

I'm sorry....




Cold hands means a warm heart

[This message has been edited by the_loner_23 (06-12-2003 04:58 PM).]

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ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
1 posted 2003-06-12 05:21 PM


You don't have to be sorry Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

gemjop
Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
2 posted 2003-06-12 05:46 PM


heck, it seems he loves ya jules, theres nothing to worry about. but yes, worry sometimes gets the better of us.

much love,
gem xxx

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3 posted 2003-06-12 11:35 PM


Ouch! Poor lad.....watch those redheads, boy, they're trouble.....but....

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2003-06-13 03:48 AM


trust

that's the key

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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5 posted 2008-01-31 10:48 PM


you're Right! passing Shadows

Trust is very much a key

ARCTIC WIND

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