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SarBear
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0 posted 2003-06-12 03:06 PM


Note-Maybe you can understand this poem and maybe you cant, just look closely, its my true feelings, but when you let your true feelings flow, sometimes, things can get a little confusing.Just understand that I am relating my feelings to real life things.Sorry if it confuses you but if it does just ask about it.

Endless feelings touched by confusion wonder my tortured soul
I dont know who to trust
Dont know where to go
Wonder the halls of misery
Take each breath with doubt
Dont understand why I have been given this life to live out
I could have it better
I could have it worse
Guilt spreads itself like a blanket around my freezing body
I clutch my loved ones closer
As they move farther away
Each day is getting longer
Drowned by my endless tears
I just want it to be over
To lay down and have it through
I know the easy route isnt the right route
But considering the highway I'm on
Any wrong turn
cant be as bad as the one before it



© Copyright 2003 Sara Connolly - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-06-12 04:45 PM


The angst and confusion of dealing with uncertainty and change is always hard...
I assume their is guilt for past actions you have taken inside the family itself and the distance that grows whether physical or emotional is always hard to deal with.

The path you are on however... while it could be better and could be worse... is yours and at each fork in the road..with each decision you make you influence where it leads you and those you love...

(((HUGS))) the days sometimes are long..and the nights never end at times... but there is tomorrow and  with each step you take to make life a positive thing...do do the most with what you are and have.. amkes the next one a bit easier to understand and to deal with...

hang in there...!!!!

RedStoneEB
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2 posted 2003-06-13 03:18 AM


well i understand it and i enjoyed reading it goodwork

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-06-13 03:34 AM


i understand
lucky
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4 posted 2003-06-14 10:45 PM



One small suggestion... I have a very difficult time seeing the lighter pastel font shades.  Maybe you meant for it to be that way for a reason and that could very well be Confusin' lol... Bad eyesight...

lucky dale


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5 posted 2003-06-15 01:01 AM


LOL -- ya beat me to it, Lucky! A good poem, this, but I had to highlight it by using "Select" before I could read it....

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6 posted 2003-06-15 03:10 AM


Laughter before tears is better....I bout went cross eyed.  haha

But...the poetry was beautiful.
I feel much this same way often...
Your feelings are shared my dear, for this you can be sure.

Great Write SarBear

)))HUGS(((   Tima C.

If you cant get rid of the skeletons in your closet, you'd best teach them how to dance.  George Bernard Shaw

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7 posted 2008-02-02 02:17 PM




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