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At this Moment, Lean Back |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Fixed as if an IV flows Direct to her pen His thoughts are streaming There by river’s opening Memories gush forth ~*~ Fade into time ~*~ Interlocked elocution braiding time black meeting white behind eyes blending, melding, molding bleeding soaring where fingers are tendrils curling into sinews holding curves of write. Now, is their time, silent thoughts harkening where the flute aspires though only love might reach. Listen… and you will hear love sounds. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Her thoughts run rampant Fixed as if an IV flows Direct to her pen His thoughts are streaming There by river’s opening Memories gush forth Listen..."You've Got Mail." Ding. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Aw the comfort of a contented relationship... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Okay ... I checked my watch ... you napping at work again ? Tee-hee ! Lovely piece ... soooooooooooo real~ If I didn't know better ...... nah !  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
this sounds like passion |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
where fingers are tendrils curling into sinews holding curves this line..I love... an image well portrayed... Nice work "K"... subtly sensual and as always from you..soft. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
See?!! NOw, this is what I mean....I want to write like this!!!  I do love it though.....hee hee.  |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
braiding time...... ....where the flute aspires wow this is wonderful I hear this sound  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is a very sensual piece Sunshinygirl. Keeping it Maree. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
just fabulous!!!!!! QjQ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh yes!! This I love!! Soft and sensual.. Cosy warm read on a rainy Canadian day. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea...This is lovely...like silk! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
What was for lunch!?? This is a very awesome penning M'lady. You have done very well |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
One could relax an eternity within the intricate weave of your thoughts. Blended and shaken...just the right way. Sincerely, Reg |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
very nyce piece sunshine..... i liked the structure you used and the vocab and imagery in this one... and of course i had to reply to your piece.. u know how i do..lol... |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
karilea, this is beautiful. i'm keeping it.it may well be my favourite of yours so far.  love gem xxxxx |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
ok listening bump to library nice write bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Simply beautiful. Love this, Karilea. Hugs to you, friend.  "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-12-2003 04:22 PM).] |
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anwaarhassan Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 181Menifee, CA |
Enjoyed reading this...excellent write. Anwaar |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm still listening |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
what a beautiful write from such an incredible writer I always Love reading you DQ PS - I have'nt forgotten the offer - I am moving & as soon as I am settled I look forward to a write - You amaze me - I admire your talent |
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