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falling between the cracks |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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I write Only to fall Between the cracks I somehow tend to get lost... Sometimes I question my purpose and sometimes yours I even begin to contemplate... To why I should even care expressing airing out the dust bunnies that collect within the pockets of a pair of faded blue jeans that went out of style... When I lost my faith in myself when I lost faith in my feelings when I grew cynical... I sit here too often trying to figure out a plan trying to shrug off these passing moments trying to push away the silly notions of wanting to break down in another's arms... I know I'm better off alone better off ignoring the disappointments better off falling between the cracks better off getting lost within myself... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (06-25-2003 09:27 PM).] |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
I know I'm better off alone better off ignoring the disappointments better off falling between the cracks better off getting lost within myself... I love that...I feel it very, very often!! Great write Tima Please visit my website: www.southerncountrywebdesign.com/~heart/ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
This hurt I'm not quite sure how to comment cause you know I disagree. It is as always great writing though |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
*sigh* thanx guys...no comment raph  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I write Only to fall Between the cracks I somehow tend to get lost... Sometimes I question my purpose and sometimes yours I even begin to contemplate... Ceinwyn, I felt a lot of pain in this one. I feel bad, but I can't figure out what about. Is it about writing in general or about here or to a certain individual? Either way, it's good writing and I hope things get better.....whatever is causing the pain.  Hugs to you Ethel |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
sweet ethel all the above I guess  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very painful write, I hope tomorrow looks better |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ok this write is amazing but NO NO NO and NO heh xxoo |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
grin just a passing moment lil winged one i'm all good now thanx If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
not gonna let this fall between the cracks, back to the top. yep, this hurt, excellent stuff lady, glad ur feeling better. |
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