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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
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0 posted 2003-06-12 12:46 PM


well this isnt really one about love its just thoughts that go through my mind i guess well anyway i hope you enjoy reading it.
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Thoughts they travel afar, to places beyond the skies,

And Places deep down inside,

To dreams

The dreams I hold inside

Wishing…

Wishing that life was happy and long
Instand of the path to what I belong
The path of the hurt and wounded

The one that leads to Sorrow and hurt

The dreams tell my tales
Tales of love I wish belonged to me
Tales of things I wish I could become
Tales of happiness I long to holds in my hands

Like seeds it drains away thought the gaps
Slowly losing that what I once held
Hoping it would land in the emptiness inside
And grow into the paths of tomorrow

So many paths inside tangled in the web of life
As the paths ive walked fade from sight
Another’s grow in the places I have yet to tread
Spreading out on paths of future life’s to be told

My thoughts travel back to my mind
Telling me I have yet to find
The answers to the questions of life

But one thing I know…

The paths I walk lead to my own little doom.


© Copyright 2003 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2003-06-12 03:54 PM


The dreams I hold inside

Wishing…

Wishing that life was happy and long
Instand of the path to what I belong
The path of the hurt and wounded

The one that leads to Sorrow and hurt

The dreams tell my tales
Tales of love I wish belonged to me
Tales of things I wish I could become
Tales of happiness I long to holds in my hands

I enjoyed reading it...and you have described my heart through these lines!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-06-13 04:59 AM


I can relate well
QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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3 posted 2003-06-24 04:14 PM


enjoyed,,,
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2003-06-25 08:03 PM


Dang Lee . . .
had me happy till the end there
awesome write btw
xxoo

devinechild22
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since 2002-08-28
Posts 571

5 posted 2003-06-28 06:28 PM


Hey that was really good! I enjoyed it. I sent you an email. It explaines why I took so long to reply. Email me back ok?
             *Allison*

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