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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2003-06-12 05:50 AM


I walked thought that darkness
Searching for myself
The memories I hold
And dreams to be told

My fears grew strong
As nightmares rode forth
Coming to take me back
To the doomed life I walked

I took out my sword of strength
And killed the enemies within
The nightmares faded to dust
As I stepped into my happiness


© Copyright 2003 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2003-06-12 09:42 AM


Lee~
At the top of the posting screen, is a list of moderators for this forum.
Click on it and send them (I suggest the General Alert group) to move this lovely post to the new Open #27 Forum~

It's too lovely to sit here unread~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-06-13 04:53 AM


wow! Good write!
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-06-13 06:21 AM


Enjoyed...James
Patricia
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4 posted 2003-06-13 06:21 AM


I took out my sword of strength
And killed the enemies within
The nightmares faded to dust
As I stepped into my happiness

To recognize the enemies for what they are and have the strength to extinguish them so that you may enjoy happiness.  How wonderful.  Liked this piece very much.
Patricia


gemjop
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5 posted 2003-06-13 08:56 AM


As nightmares rode forth.....

they do don't they. enjoyed this piece very much. er, can u send me whatever made your nightmares go away? lol.

RedStoneEB
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6 posted 2003-06-13 09:04 AM


hello all you lot that relied

Marge Tindal - thanks for getting it moved so these other wonderful poets could read it too and thanks for saying it was good

passing shadows - thanks for the comment really makes me feel good knowing people enjoy my work

JamesMichael - lol you seem a little nervous but thats ok thanks for the comment

Patricia - hey hey glad you put your thoughts into your reply too glad you understand it

gemjop - lol to make your dreams go away face then and they will hide from you instand of you hiding from them its that simple glad you enjoyed the poem

thanks all hope to write some new poems soon


my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

Artic Wind
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7 posted 2008-01-31 11:21 PM


Good, you kill those inner demons within the human mind and Past

ARCTIC WIND

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