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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2003-06-12 06:24 AM


She spread her wings, so tender and light
Wrapping me in her warmth,
Her heavenly eyes gazed into my own
And calmness flooded through my soul

Her voice echoed through my veins
Flowing towards my heart like blood
Slowly pumped away to my mind
Filling me with thoughts of love

I felt myself floating up towards the skies
As she guided me towards heavens gates
Not worried about the world below
Feeling safe in the presence of this angel

Suddenly I began to sink down again
Not knowing why I fell from her
As I watched her fly on towards the light
Her voice called back its not your time

[This message has been edited by RedStoneEB (06-12-2003 01:01 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-06-12 09:34 AM


Lee~
This is just a wonderful write~

'Her voice called back its not your time'

What a poignant closing~

Welcome to PiPs circle of friends and poets~
I'm glad you're here~
We will be friends for sure~
*Huglets*
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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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2 posted 2003-06-12 12:27 PM


Lee:

you KNOW this is my favorite one . . .


the angels wings are always in reach - she guides you . . . listen . . .

this is a beautiful display of what we have to come and what we have left to do here
amazing
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (06-13-2003 03:13 AM).]

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-06-12 12:41 PM



Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-06-12 12:44 PM


A heavenly write!

Love & Eternal Light,
Earth Angel

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
5 posted 2003-06-12 03:31 PM


I believe in angels, and I now know they exist on passions.........you have a way with words!
QjQ
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6 posted 2003-06-24 04:10 PM


enjoyed,,
Artic Wind
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7 posted 2008-11-02 03:38 PM


Heavenly Write Indeed!


ARCTIC WIND

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