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another midnight
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another midnight |
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crimson tear Member
since 2003-06-07
Posts 76Massachusetts 
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Another midnight Another chance to lose myself I walk at night In the clear and still air The soothing calm A sweet silence Broken only by the sounds of my footsteps The only lights, that of the bright moon This is where i draw my strength Feeding off the night The only place in this world of noise Where i can collect my thoughts The dead of night Where i can truly be alone I'm the only person on earth Lost in the black I am at peace |
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joyfull girl Junior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 15 |
it's nice to see something from you that is not so dark! "Feeding off the night" love that line There is an interesting contrast you use in losing your self and at the same time being at peace. I like this a lot |
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crimson tear Member
since 2003-06-07
Posts 76Massachusetts |
thank you i just wrote it right after i came in from a walk. |
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laurie Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 153canada, ontario |
l've walked at midnight, but never felt like this before... l envy you, crimson. it's good. laurie. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! i know this well! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Lovely Writing ARCTIC WIND |
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