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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2003-06-11 10:58 PM




little girl in pink

beneath time's veil
i peek,

dancing by the ocean's gate
choosing shells to decorate,

little girl in pink
2l spins in a blink,

clouds of sadness drizzle down
chasing rainbows that surround,

little girl in pink,
your life with mine
in sync,

you beat,

beneath my heart
forever sweet,

through
eternity's sea
our lives
will meet

to lauren , love mommy

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-12-2003 06:41 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-06-11 11:03 PM


A touch on the heart. Bless you for this.

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the_loner_23
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2 posted 2003-06-11 11:04 PM


This is so sweet.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Chris-
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3 posted 2003-06-11 11:05 PM


that's cool, i hope she likes it
inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2003-06-11 11:08 PM


thanks, had a scare.........the other night,
took me back in time

BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2003-06-12 01:16 AM


Your anxiety was peeking through the pink before I read that you had a scare.  This is so lovingly penned...truly.

I hope all is well Michele~

garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-06-12 02:00 AM


little girl in pink,
your life with mine
in sync,

you beat,

beneath my heart
forever sweet,

through
eternity's sea
our lives
will meet


Michels, this is so sweet and loving. Just
precious.  
Hugs  
Ethel

bklynboy
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7 posted 2003-06-12 02:26 AM


Your daughter has a very caring mommy. Too bad she wont appreciate it for a while. Hope everything is ok!
inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2003-06-12 06:42 AM


thanks for caring..yes, all is well,thankfully
Aenimal
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9 posted 2003-06-12 09:46 PM


Sweet write and a lucky girl to have such a mommy
gyiel marlok
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10 posted 2003-06-12 09:48 PM


godspeed, great write
passing shadows
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11 posted 2003-06-13 04:25 AM


what a mom you are! wow! hope all is okay with ya'll
Susan Caldwell
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12 posted 2003-06-13 11:42 AM


This was so sweet.  I loved it.

Susan

littlewing
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13 posted 2003-06-14 12:28 PM


21 years in a blink . . .

mannn - Michele - you are one amazing mother - your daughter is lucky to have you - lucky to have each other

This is beautiful
Bless you both
xxoo

Artic Wind
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14 posted 2008-02-01 10:08 PM


Thats so cute and beautiful!



ARCTIC WIND

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