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gyiel marlok
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since 2003-06-08
Posts 145
OHIO

0 posted 2003-06-13 05:47 PM



KEEPER OF LOST SECRETS, EMPTY ROADS BENEATH US
DOORS TO BREAK OPEN,SUNDOWNS SCREAM STOLEN,
    LET'S RIDE.....
   broken spirits and closed captions..discretions
water under the bridge..
fidgeting for me to listen..
humbled by the voice of liberty...
infallible printings....
make things not what they seem......you butchers
can't steal my name...
slowly approach dubious suggestions
counterreact,this is my world
you have nothing to say...
no where to go,nowhere to hide..

   your hasty, haughty, impetious inbreeding
        crossed your improvising
           turned to impurity
           colluding with your
           colony...
plunge to your death as they slowly try to
rob me...
             REINFORCEMENTS
    don't try to reinsure me
       i'll reject your  
           army...
  pull apart the wishbone
looking so calmly..
GIANT RUSTY ANCHORS
   anvils your telepathy
     forget all your weaponry...
   all wanna-be venalities
  vendettas all dead...
navigate all rivalries..
         retrospectives solidity...conditional
                                   probability
       confident to hold the torch of victory..
        pageless prophecies..
         conception to adapt
          not to conclude is the story...
PROTOCOL IS USELESS IN THE BATTLE..
    LIGHT THE CANDLE...
        

DEDICATED TO THE LOST

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (06-14-2003 07:04 AM).]

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gyiel marlok
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since 2003-06-08
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OHIO
1 posted 2003-06-13 06:00 PM


NOW BE FRANK PEOPLE
inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2003-06-13 06:32 PM


i rather be michele

its cool, its a rant but you make your point

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-06-14 05:29 AM


dang! this is a very angry write, it comes across a bit harsh I think...and honestly, I'm lost. I don't know what you are writing about.
Balladeer
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4 posted 2003-06-14 07:05 AM


Using astericks to mask cursewords is not permitted in Open....poem has been edited accordingly.

Nice rant....

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
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5 posted 2008-02-01 09:20 PM


i'm lost lol

ARCTIC WIND

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