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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2003-06-11 09:45 PM


anger the fury of it all
why does this have to end
so soon,why cant we be just
freinds and conclude,this wont
work out,to much stress involed
this thing we have is just going to
disolve. eating away at us inch by inch
untill we are raw. lets just do away with it
all before it gets to deep.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

[This message has been edited by Foxyoasis (06-11-2003 09:45 PM).]

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EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
1 posted 2003-06-11 10:09 PM


hey i know exactly where your coming from i just ended a "relationship", if you will, with one of my close friends.. oh well.. i hope you guys can still manage to be friends after it all..  
Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2003-06-11 10:18 PM


love and life in general just sucks to much sometimes... i don't think im going to end it,im just really aggervated with the whole situation im in right now. I hoping for the best.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2003-06-25 02:41 PM



Are things better yet?

Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
4 posted 2003-06-25 07:43 PM


Things are so so. My life is always complex,if it isnt my love life its my health. for a long time my life life was fine. untill my bf of 6yrs decided he wanted to be single and dumped me a week after my birthday. welp all and all at least i got a nice present out of it.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


timothysangel1973
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since 2001-12-03
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Never close enough
5 posted 2003-06-26 12:22 PM


I LUB presents.....and hey, it was his loss right?

Keep your chin up!


Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
6 posted 2003-06-26 12:26 PM


I like this one. The tone is good, and it has a good rhythm.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
7 posted 2003-06-26 01:22 PM


I Know how this is....I have felt it plenty
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
8 posted 2003-06-26 02:51 PM


Foxyoasis - good thoughts in your words...

BC

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