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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-06-11 04:14 PM

Heat

inflicted upon me

thoughts overlap words

inside the brain

kiss over the outline

of my lips

again.

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

1 posted 2003-06-11 04:19 PM

In the heat of any moment,
    thoughts battle with words which
        sometimes blindly find voice ....

           ... sometimes ears too!

      A short yet profound write, excellent!!

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2003-06-11 08:48 PM

sounds like thinking instead of talking too much or shutting up while being kissed.

LOL! I like it.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

3 posted 2003-06-11 08:48 PM

short n sweet write,,, enjoyed...

QjQ

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2003-06-11 09:07 PM

wonderful...

M

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-06-12 03:31 AM

Gemma, you are really good at these. You can put a whole lot in a few words.

Very good, Lady

Hugs to you, my friend

Ethel Mae

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2003-06-12 07:10 AM

so much written in few words....
how was the kiss?

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

7 posted 2003-06-12 08:08 AM

thoughts overlap words
inside the brain

Oh...so good. I know this but could never describe it. You did perfectly.

Patricia

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

8 posted 2003-06-12 08:42 AM

awww thankyou for the replies. this was written about a dream i had.

so didnt actually get a real kiss.

thankyou again for the wonderful replies, you all make me smile!

kisses to you all!

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-06-12 12:28 PM

gem:

nice dream - can ya telepathically send those dreams to me please? lol
mine are disturbing . . .

this is lovely
xxoo

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-06-12 12:40 PM

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

11 posted 2003-06-12 01:01 PM

Again is always good...as is the first...

nicely written...

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

12 posted 2003-06-12 01:21 PM

Continued sweet dreams!

--and may your lips be outlined with kisses in reality as well!

Lovin' hugs,
EA

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

13 posted 2003-06-12 09:40 PM

Well if have to do it again then ..sigh... i will.. grins Kidding, beautiful writing gem

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

14 posted 2003-07-18 12:34 PM

"kiss over the outline

of my lips

again."

YES...I'm liking this one.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"it is better to be a part of beauty
for one instant and then cease to
exist than to exist forever
and never be a part of beauty"
-- Don Marquis

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

15 posted 2003-07-18 01:13 AM

"thoughts overlap words

inside the brain"
Heh I know this all too well

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

16 posted 2003-07-18 01:49 AM

... again and again ...

oxoxoxox

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

17 posted 2003-07-18 04:15 AM

thoughts overlapping words..and words again
Short but sweet.
Checkout my post "Jo" when you get the chance.
I experimented.

Jai

x8x_bigmike
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since 2003-07-08

Posts 130
California, USA

18 posted 2003-07-18 08:39 AM

...memories...

Mike

Wind

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since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

19 posted 2003-07-19 05:28 PM

i wouldn't forget to read you..or your mind

After 3 days..I'm almost through looking for Raph's poems..I'm tackling you next. sigh

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

20 posted 2003-07-19 05:40 PM

Ooooh, love this one!! hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

21 posted 2003-07-19 06:14 PM

Tinnnnn

Roof

Rusted!

Love shack bay-ay-bee

[This message has been edited by Local Rebel (07-19-2003 06:17 PM).]

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

22 posted 2003-07-19 06:32 PM

gemjop - many thoughts said in so few words...

BC

bklynboy
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since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

23 posted 2003-07-21 07:52 AM

Very good!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

24 posted 2003-07-21 09:18 AM

OMG! I love this!!!

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

25 posted 2003-07-21 09:23 AM

Nice dreams sometimes overlap into real time.. maybe???

Pepper
"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

26 posted 2003-07-21 09:36 AM

enjoyed

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