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Amature2
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0 posted 2003-06-11 11:40 AM



Darkness

Trapped in an Abyss
Take my hand don't let me fade
Into this Darkness



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1 posted 2003-06-11 01:09 PM


Amature2~
Oh ... this is very good~
A well-worked format~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2 posted 2003-06-11 08:29 PM


reminds me of my Short Moods poems. Enjoyed this...request in poetry form.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

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displaced
3 posted 2003-06-14 04:25 AM


i hear you
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4 posted 2008-02-01 05:21 PM


Very powerful!

Don't fade!

lol

ARCTIC WIND

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