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Martini
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0 posted 2003-06-11 11:15 AM


I haven't posted in a very very long time, it seems I had lost my muse.I don't know if it's back, but I'm defiantely experiencing the want to write again.It's a little rough, but it was how I was feeling this morning.


Another night has ended
The Passion, and power
Of the night's events have passed
Left only is the dawning of the new day
And the love I feel for you

Your arm draped gently around my side
Holding me close to you
Keeping me safe,
Warm,
Loved.

Slowly I roll
To look into your beautiful eyes when you awake
Smiling at me
Showing me you feel everything that I feel
And as you gently kiss my forehead
I know it's going to be a good morning


© Copyright 2003 Stephanie McMillan - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-06-11 11:17 AM


Hi, neighbour! Congratulations! Your muse is back!

Warm welcoming back hugs,
EA

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-06-11 11:48 AM


Steph, I don't think I know you, but I sure am glad you're back.  

I'm Ethel....garysgirl, and I'm one of the hopeless romantics around here. So, you know that I love this poem of love!!  

I'll be looking for more of your work to come. I especially liked this part of your poem....

Another night has ended
The Passion, and power
Of the night's events have passed
Left only is the dawning of the new day
And the love I feel for you


Isn't it a wonderful feeling to love and to be loved in return? I know this, too, and I love it......
To look into your beautiful eyes when you awake
Smiling at me
Showing me you feel everything that I feel


Such a great feeling, it is!!  
hugs to you  
Ethel


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3 posted 2003-06-11 11:57 AM


Martini  -   I really enjoyed this write of love to-day. Thankyou. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Martini
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Toronto, Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2003-06-11 01:10 PM


Thank you for your replys, love is an amazing thing, and no matter how long you have known the person, been with the person, felt love for the person, everyday is a new beginning, a day for that love to grow stronger, and emcompass you even more.  I wish for everyone to feel and understand the meaning of true love, and sometimes it may take a while but happiness comes to those who wait!

Thanks again for your sweet replies!!

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
   ~Robert Frost


gemjop
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5 posted 2003-06-11 01:23 PM


oh this made me tingle, n think about those mornings u wrote of, that are heaven... so thankyou, romantic lady, for reminding me, with your beautiful poetic celebration of love!

love gemma xxx

p.s, nice to meet u, glad ur back.

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-06-11 01:28 PM


Martini
Can't start better than that. enjoyed

Martini
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7 posted 2003-06-13 08:47 AM


Heavenly mornings are amazing, they make you want to stay in bed all day

Thank you both for your replies, it's good to be back!

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
   ~Robert Frost


passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-06-14 04:09 AM


good write...nice to see you
VBallNut
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9 posted 2003-08-04 04:33 PM


This is beautiful!  I know how wonderful it feels to wake up next to that someone special.  Glad you have found your muse and I'll look for more writings from you!
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