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Kisses . . . . . . . . . . (Rictameter)

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Earth Angel
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~*~
Kisses,
Sweet and tender,
Fill the air with romance,
Showing how much one truly cares.
Connecting with heart of one whom you love,
Breathing into each others' soul,
Pressing lips, soft and warm,
Trembling with sweet
Kisses.
~*~
© Copyright 2003 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 06-11-2003 11:09 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Linda, you are creating art forms with your Rictameters...between you and Ethel, we are doubly blessed...
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Sunshine ~

Very kind of you to say so! Ethel's wonderful rictameters were what inspired me to write them--and I love writing them!

May your day be full of fun, Sun!

Huggums,
Linda
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3 posted 06-11-2003 11:55 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

AWWW, Linda...I didn't know that my rictameters inspired you to write them!!  Goodness, that makes me feel good, because you are certainly a master at writing them...but, you are at everything you write. You can always say so much in a few words...just like this wonderful poem. I'm still working on saying more in my few words.

I wish I could learn to write these rictameters in rhyme, the way that Ken...Kayjay does. I'm still working on that, too. I can't get the rhymes to sound just right in rictameter, though.

These are really fun to do aren't they?

Well, I'm going to be off for a while. I have a doctors appointment late this afternoon.  Ugh!! I would cancel it if I could think of a good enough reason.

Have fun, and I'll see ya'll later.  

Hugs  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-11-2003 11:56 AM).]

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Hmmm, awww, yes Linda~
Nice pucker up!  
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Ethel ~

I do believe that you and I belong to a mutual admiration society!--and that is so fun and special!

Hope all goes well with your appointment with your doctor!

Loves and hugs,
Linda
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BluesSerenade ~

I'll never find myself tuckering of puckering!

Have a great day!
Warm hugs
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You have aged the wine of kiss to a new bliss
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Mr. T.

~*~

~*~

EA
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Ah, yes... *G*

Forget this work, my mind must play
For reading what you have to say
I'll swoon a while at thoughts of kissing
And all the great delights I'm missing!
I know my rhyme is lacking form
But for me, that's quite the norm...
I give you my appreciation
Now will enjoy mind's titillation. *G*

Thoroughly enjoyed, EA!!! *S*
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Linda, our earth angel, you do make me smile, thank goodness for your lovely poems that never fail to make us feel all warm and contented.

keep em coming gal!

love gem
xxxxxxxx  
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Kisses truly are great with someone you love.
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Dear Belle of the South ~

That was one fine poetic reply! Now you've got me *G*'n & *S*'n all over the place!



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gem ~

--that is what you truly are!-- a "gem"!
Loved your emoticons--and your kind words!


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pisumnux ~

Kiss away, me matie!   


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Oh Linda this is soooooooo inspiring!
I want to melt in a kiss!
Beautiful!
Love, Margherita
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very good! excuse my ignorance but what is a rictermeter?

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

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Margherita ~

Ooooo! I like how you put that!---"melt in a kiss"!  

Mmmm! Mmmm! Kisses are my favorite food!


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Foxyoasis ~

A rictameter starts off with

2 syllables (beats)
then 4
then 6
then 8
then 10
then 8
then 6
then 4
then the original two

I hope that helped!

Warm hugs,
EA
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(smiles) Oh Linda, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I dream so much to shower my dream girl in kisses when the time is right after I get to develop a deep friendship with one! (kiss on cheek) Yay, God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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Noah, becoming friends first, makes the loving so much more special!

~ May your dreams all be sweet and be reflected in  your reality...

Sqeezums,
EA
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EA,

How do you do this?  The flow of words is so perfect while remaining in the perfect form.

One word...PERFECT!

Patricia  
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ahh thats great EA, I remember doing this kind of poetry about 10 years ago in like 5th grade, but then it was about like thanksgiving or something, but to see someone do it well and with passion is new to me, great write, great memories, thanks abazillion
 
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