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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2003-06-11 11:03 AM



~*~
Kisses,
Sweet and tender,
Fill the air with romance,
Showing how much one truly cares.
Connecting with heart of one whom you love,
Breathing into each others' soul,
Pressing lips, soft and warm,
Trembling with sweet
Kisses.
~*~

© Copyright 2003 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-06-11 11:09 AM


Linda, you are creating art forms with your Rictameters...between you and Ethel, we are doubly blessed...
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-06-11 11:15 AM


Sunshine ~

Very kind of you to say so! Ethel's wonderful rictameters were what inspired me to write them--and I love writing them!

May your day be full of fun, Sun!

Huggums,
Linda

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3 posted 2003-06-11 11:55 AM


AWWW, Linda...I didn't know that my rictameters inspired you to write them!!  Goodness, that makes me feel good, because you are certainly a master at writing them...but, you are at everything you write. You can always say so much in a few words...just like this wonderful poem. I'm still working on saying more in my few words.

I wish I could learn to write these rictameters in rhyme, the way that Ken...Kayjay does. I'm still working on that, too. I can't get the rhymes to sound just right in rictameter, though.

These are really fun to do aren't they?

Well, I'm going to be off for a while. I have a doctors appointment late this afternoon.  Ugh!! I would cancel it if I could think of a good enough reason.

Have fun, and I'll see ya'll later.  

Hugs  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-11-2003 11:56 AM).]

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4 posted 2003-06-11 11:59 AM


Hmmm, awww, yes Linda~
Nice pucker up!  

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Earth Angel
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6 posted 2003-06-11 12:01 PM


Ethel ~

I do believe that you and I belong to a mutual admiration society!--and that is so fun and special!

Hope all goes well with your appointment with your doctor!

Loves and hugs,
Linda

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7 posted 2003-06-11 12:04 PM


BluesSerenade ~

I'll never find myself tuckering of puckering!

Have a great day!
Warm hugs
EA

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2003-06-11 12:05 PM


Chris

EA

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9 posted 2003-06-11 12:06 PM


Earth Angel
You have aged the wine of kiss to a new bliss

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10 posted 2003-06-11 12:13 PM



Mr. T.

~*~

~*~

EA

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11 posted 2003-06-11 12:33 PM


Ah, yes... *G*

Forget this work, my mind must play
For reading what you have to say
I'll swoon a while at thoughts of kissing
And all the great delights I'm missing!
I know my rhyme is lacking form
But for me, that's quite the norm...
I give you my appreciation
Now will enjoy mind's titillation. *G*

Thoroughly enjoyed, EA!!! *S*

gemjop
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12 posted 2003-06-11 12:40 PM


              

Linda, our earth angel, you do make me smile, thank goodness for your lovely poems that never fail to make us feel all warm and contented.

keep em coming gal!

love gem
xxxxxxxx  

pisumnux
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13 posted 2003-06-11 12:48 PM


Kisses truly are great with someone you love.
Earth Angel
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14 posted 2003-06-11 12:56 PM


Dear Belle of the South ~

That was one fine poetic reply! Now you've got me *G*'n & *S*'n all over the place!



EA

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15 posted 2003-06-11 12:57 PM


gem ~

--that is what you truly are!-- a "gem"!
Loved your emoticons--and your kind words!


EA

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16 posted 2003-06-11 12:58 PM


pisumnux ~

Kiss away, me matie!   


EA

Margherita
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17 posted 2003-06-11 01:19 PM


Oh Linda this is soooooooo inspiring!
I want to melt in a kiss!
Beautiful!
Love, Margherita

Foxyoasis
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18 posted 2003-06-11 01:22 PM


very good! excuse my ignorance but what is a rictermeter?

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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19 posted 2003-06-11 03:57 PM


Margherita ~

Ooooo! I like how you put that!---"melt in a kiss"!  

Mmmm! Mmmm! Kisses are my favorite food!


EA

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20 posted 2003-06-11 04:00 PM


Foxyoasis ~

A rictameter starts off with

2 syllables (beats)
then 4
then 6
then 8
then 10
then 8
then 6
then 4
then the original two

I hope that helped!

Warm hugs,
EA

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21 posted 2003-06-11 07:47 PM




(smiles) Oh Linda, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I dream so much to shower my dream girl in kisses when the time is right after I get to develop a deep friendship with one! (kiss on cheek) Yay, God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Earth Angel
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22 posted 2003-06-11 07:53 PM


Noah, becoming friends first, makes the loving so much more special!

~ May your dreams all be sweet and be reflected in  your reality...

Sqeezums,
EA

Patricia
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23 posted 2003-06-11 11:27 PM


EA,

How do you do this?  The flow of words is so perfect while remaining in the perfect form.

One word...PERFECT!

Patricia  

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24 posted 2003-06-11 11:42 PM


ahh thats great EA, I remember doing this kind of poetry about 10 years ago in like 5th grade, but then it was about like thanksgiving or something, but to see someone do it well and with passion is new to me, great write, great memories, thanks abazillion
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25 posted 2003-06-11 11:44 PM


How romantic. I just love it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Earth Angel
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26 posted 2003-06-12 12:29 PM


Patricia ~

I am enjoying writing rictameters so much!--and it pleases me greatly that they are being so well-received! Thank you for adding to my writing pleasure!  

Loves 'n hugs,
EA

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27 posted 2003-06-12 12:31 PM


Chris ~

---"Angel" curtseying at your thoughtful and flattering words! Thank you very much!

Happy hugs,
EA

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28 posted 2003-06-12 12:33 PM


Julie ~

A romantic such as yourself WOULD appreciate the romance such sweet kisses!

To Love & Romance!
Huggums,
EA

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29 posted 2003-06-26 10:28 AM


I LOVED IT! :-)

*~*~*~*~
Benita
*~*~*~*~

*******************************
Love deeply and passionately.
You might get hurt but
it's the only way to live

Earth Angel
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30 posted 2003-06-26 10:41 AM


BRHP ~

Well that certainly was a surprise to see my Kisses revived! LOL

I'm pleased that you enjoyed my Kisses!--Ooops! That didn't come out right!

Warm hugs,
EA

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31 posted 2003-06-26 11:30 AM


yay more kisses!
Earth Angel
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32 posted 2003-06-26 01:00 PM


gem ~

Yeppers! Kissin's my favorite food!--besides angel food cake!


EA

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33 posted 2009-03-28 12:06 PM


Love this


ARCTIC WIND

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