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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-06-11 09:36 AM


Knew it was coming
That this Forum would fill up
~ It's been our haven ~
Now Twenty-Seven calls us
where all the poets will join

Joining together
In Open Twenty-seven
The poets meet here
To share our thoughts and feelings
Now we start a new haven!


[This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-11-2003 10:47 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-06-11 09:49 AM


Excellent Tankas Ladies!!
I"m all moved in !!
hugs, Chris

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2 posted 2003-06-11 10:12 AM


garysgirl
Lovely, enjoyed.

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3 posted 2003-06-11 10:48 AM


Thank you, Chris and Seymour.
Heart hugs to each of you.  
Ethel

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4 posted 2003-06-11 10:49 AM




Build it, they will come
Post it, and the poets read
Threads silvery gold
Sticks and stones, continuing
to make a castle of dreams






[This message has been edited by Sunshine (06-11-2003 10:51 AM).]

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5 posted 2003-06-11 10:52 AM


Ethel

~*~
Forum twenty seven
Will be our new
Poetic heaven!

~*~

Happy sailing!
Linda

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6 posted 2003-06-11 11:30 AM


Ooops! I just realized that you requested an add-on tanka reply, so here's my feeble attempt!

~*~
Forum twenty-six
Is filled with sweet memories,
I'll treasure always.
But forum twenty-seven
Will be poetic heaven.
~*~

***I just popped back in because I had to correct a faux pas in the number of syllables on the third line!***

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (06-11-2003 01:05 PM).]

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7 posted 2003-06-11 01:46 PM


The flow of beauty
will never come to an end
we just start anew

Love and thank you!
Margherita

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8 posted 2003-06-11 03:10 PM




New coat of lacquer
And a new season fashion
New unsolved riddles
And brand new answers
Bound for this forum



Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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9 posted 2003-06-17 05:52 PM




Placeing a candle in the window to show all the way home on the darkest nite.

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


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10 posted 2008-02-10 06:30 PM


Enjoyed the little write!

  

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