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ashly
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0 posted 04-07-2007 12:06 AM       View Profile for ashly   Email ashly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ashly


ok im new and well thought to post this ...

  I stand here cold and alone ..  for what it feels like forever . i hide in the shadows of shame and guilt , hiding From the light to expose the truth .. hiding my face from others to see , You know they say the "eyes are the windows to the soul" Dare to gaze into my eyes and reap what you see .For when i see them myself ... i see nothing more then a creature staring back at me .Almost numb to everything around.I used to bleed to know i was still alive as a quote from a song ... just to remember that i was still breathing  cause when everything did exact feel like the movies i needed to know .Dreams from reality seemed to collide lost between two worlds so different hard to find the right grasp. This is the dear old me  I feel as if i'm slowly awaking from a long lived coma every breath i take slow and paced ,every blink i made slowly as clearing the sleep from my eyes,  now that im fully awake now dear i know what i should do .... Everyone around me now seems to become more fake..... everything is wonderful now
Drauntz
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1 posted 04-07-2007 10:47 AM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

wonderful. the porcess of growing. snow is white, coal is black. mixing them up, still snow is white and coal is black. do not lose the faith of truth and the most important, the love for life.
ashly
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2 posted 04-07-2007 06:58 PM       View Profile for ashly   Email ashly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ashly

Love for life surely isnt lost  ... about this time
Kitherion
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3 posted 04-20-2007 01:40 AM       View Profile for Kitherion   Email Kitherion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kitherion

Cool...

James Blunt comes to mind:

"You're beautiful..."
 
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