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Ciryadin
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0 posted 07-13-2005 07:40 AM       View Profile for Ciryadin   Email Ciryadin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ciryadin

Can't remember for the love of god. Why or when i wrote this down, and i have got NO clue to what it means.

Anyone care to explain.

"For haveth i not, condemned my own actions within boundries given by my own tale. Mayhap calling upon my dreary past to lay damnation on my actions of untold wavering to unfold before thy all seeing eye, shall it shed light within darkness in the pools of the abyss that is my soul"
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1 posted 07-13-2005 10:04 AM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

Sounds like someone that keeps repeating the same mistakes..over and over and they just see no way to end the anguish over such.

*shrug* just how I saw it...today.  Tomorrow may be different.  

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

LeeJ
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2 posted 07-13-2005 01:21 PM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

"For haveth i not, condemned my own actions within boundries given by my own tale.

Guilt lay out my condemnation...from the results of my choice...what I know....


Mayhap calling upon my dreary past to lay damnation on my actions of untold wavering

it is from my secret sins of my life, that distress leaches in....


to unfold before thy all seeing eye, shall it shed light within darkness in the pools of the abyss that is my soul"


all seeing eye could be the God as this person knows Him to be...that I be made wiser, and forgiven for my tresspasses


I believe this person is realizing that their sins have caused their own abyss, and laying blame on self...

or....perhaps a written warning, from experience....?
Ciryadin
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3 posted 07-14-2005 04:56 AM       View Profile for Ciryadin   Email Ciryadin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ciryadin

Wish i knew. :|

Thanks for the input sofar, got some idea, but doesn't quench my thirst to find out the bottom of why on earth i penned it down.
 
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