between the gutter & the stars
i'm not sure what we're callin it
but some rhymes are approximate
do rhymes like that bother anyone?
i mean, i know a lot of people cling to strict rules when they rhyme, but i have quite the affinity for approximate rhymes, almost rhymes.
"swallow all your bitter pills.
that's what makes you beautiful."
-goo goo dolls
here's another one. (from a credible source, not just one off the top o me noggin.) i just love lines like that, and they don't quite rhyme...but it's usually close enough to make it, ya know.
i was just readin a post in teen and someone got ripped for usin one, and i just wondered how out of place those seem, how irritating are they, or if they come off as intended?
or just any views from any of you
[This message has been edited by MidnightSon (07-08-2002 03:34 PM).]