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Master
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since 1999-08-18
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Boston, MA

0 posted 2003-06-12 12:56 PM


The fog descended. Nothing could be seen.
The chairs out on the balcony were wet.
He held her by the waist. She leaned
Over the fence and threw the cigarette,
Which at the time was lit, to see it mark
Its path across the grayness of the mist
And when at last it vanished in the dark,
It dawned on her that all of us exist
Just in the moment of some endless chase,
For one another radiating light,
So as to guide each other through the maze,
Which one, alone, cannot discern at night.


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[This message has been edited by Master (06-12-2003 01:56 AM).]

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Temptress
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since 1999-06-15
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1 posted 2003-06-12 01:16 AM


at night for real..and in the night time of our lives I believe. Love this.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

junemac
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since 2003-04-24
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uk
2 posted 2003-06-12 05:53 AM


i thought this was very clever and enjoyed it very much.

hugs from june x

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-06-12 12:36 PM


cool write
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