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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-06-12 12:41 PM


Sword thrust
through the heart
of shadow

Dominion ended
I will not mourn
the death of you

Submerged
in the warmth of
your blood spilled

I will lay fetal
I will be reborn


© Copyright 2003 raphael giuffrida - All Rights Reserved
icebox
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows
1 posted 2003-06-12 12:48 PM


Simple and to the point (no pun intended).

I like it!

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2003-06-12 01:26 AM


Raph!!!!

You speaking of yourself here?

brilliant brilliant amazing write
you  . . .


If I am off - oops - but mannnn
this is (in awe)
xxoo

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
3 posted 2003-06-12 06:57 AM



yes, to whom do you speak, i wonder,.....whoever tho, beyond the darkness, it is enpowering......

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2003-06-12 12:33 PM


dang! that's powerful!
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
5 posted 2003-06-12 09:18 PM


thank you kindly icebox

Sue that's the intended target yes

inked empowering yes only if this feeling lasts

thanks dix

JenniX
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since 2003-06-05
Posts 29

6 posted 2003-06-13 12:26 PM


powerfull poem.
To whom might this be about,
out thru the darknes is  thou soul
great poem
continie the great work
JenniX

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
7 posted 2003-06-13 04:03 PM


Thanks JX appreciate it
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