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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2003-06-11 12:55 PM



Here's 1 i written tonight,sorta depressing. but i feel so much better that i got the negativity out of me.


*The Curse*

sometimes i feel cursed with this kind heart of mine.
it only causes hurt and pain,it makes me wanna go insane,
why can't i be shallow and self centered like everyone else..
i guess i could never be like that,then i wouldent be me. ill just have
to deal with being nice and kind and hope for the best,hopefully i wont be
crushed and stamperd on to many times,i dont know how long i can live this
lie,the lie of my insides trying sometime to be someone else...still I push on and try
to be me even if it means getting hurt repeatly/

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ecrivan
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1 posted 2003-06-11 12:57 PM


I have met the self-centered lot...and there are things to learn from them...but resist behaving like that nice write and welcome here.


garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-06-11 01:25 AM


I know how you feel in this one. I've tried lots of times in my life to treat others mean when they
treat me mean....it never last long, before I tell
them that I'm sorry. I'mn really glad that I'm
not like those mean people......you should be, too.
Hugs to you  
Ethel

Foxyoasis
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3 posted 2003-06-11 01:29 AM


thanks everyone for the good comments.
passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-06-11 02:09 AM


good to get it out
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