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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-06-10 05:47 PM



If I Should Fall To Pieces …
~*Marge Tindal*~

If I should fall to pieces
would you place a little part of me in your pocket
or perhaps in a locket of long-remember?

Would you tuck a little piece of me
in a corner of your heart
to touch you on a December-In-Remember
when the nights have chilled and frost lays on the lawn?

Will you recall a tiny fragment of this friendship
that has warmed you all year long?
But, most of all … when the raindrops fall
will you let me come in gently recalled flow
to warm your heart?

For if you do these things …
then I will be with you for all of time … and longer
nothing will take my memory from you~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2003 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Selina
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1 posted 2003-06-10 05:49 PM


Very nice.. reminded me of close friendships and special times.  Thanks
Sudhir Iyer
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2 posted 2003-06-10 05:55 PM


stitched in laces of remember, my friend...

regards
sudhir

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3 posted 2003-06-10 06:01 PM


Heartbreakingly beautiful, Marge... but don't ever forget... If you should fall, I'll cushion your landing. *S* Love you!
kayjay
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4 posted 2003-06-10 06:12 PM


To be so remembered
To be one worth remembering
As I'm sure you are...

Ken J

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-06-10 06:12 PM


Reminded me of some of my recent thoughts...like who really cares for me and who is just saying that they do for their own selfish reasons...James
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6 posted 2003-06-10 06:22 PM


Dear Marge:  I do love this!  You are already in a corner of my heart for all time.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Betty
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7 posted 2003-06-10 06:27 PM


This is beautiful. You have been with me many times ... :-)  :-)
Love you,
Betty

Bill Charles
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8 posted 2003-06-10 06:51 PM


Marge - lovely writing, as you do...

BC

NewEnglandlazurlu
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9 posted 2003-06-10 08:40 PM


Marge, a wonderful testiment to friendship.

Hon, so often I think of you and you know, and if you don't I'm telling you now, there is a very large piece of you in my heart.

I am grateful for you and our friendship.  Love you, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

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10 posted 2003-06-11 03:37 AM


so sadly beautiful! the way I like them!
Magicmystery
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11 posted 2003-06-11 08:59 AM


Reminding me of all the friends I left behind in Windsor and don't call often enough.

Thank you for these wonderful words.

Sherry

Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today.

Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2003-07-02 05:25 PM


PoetFriends~
Many of you nest gently in my heart ... thank you for your friendship and love~

I'm strolling through some melancholy moments that sad anniversaries often bring ... I will reach out and gather your love to comfort me~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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