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nobody
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since 2003-05-19
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0 posted 2003-06-10 03:59 PM



a little girl looks up at the cieling,clutching her sheets
why did it happen to her?what had she ever done?
she waits for a bus with a sullen ache in her heart
why did he do it?he was only meant to love
sits at her desk,seeks comfort in work
sometihng alone so no one can taunt or tease
but why oh why is all she can ask
she sees no answer and gets none in return
everydays the same with her life flashing past
soon he stopped,but the scar was still there
she stands at the grave on a cold sunday morning
bows her head and seeks and answer from god
still finding nothing,retreats in her shell
to heal the pain of the lasting betrayal
she wakes in the night,thrashing an screaming
only to find shes lost in a world on her own
now shes alone to face the darkening shadows
and cant cope with the strain of living for nothing
the demon creeps slowly taking her life
and clutching that knife all she can think
is why?why did he do it?forfit her life
and leave her doomed for eternity....


X-X-X-x-x-xSLIT MY WRISTSx-x-x-X-X-X

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-06-10 04:03 PM


This is a strong piece of poetry.

Cold hands means a warm heart

nobody
Junior Member
since 2003-05-19
Posts 43

2 posted 2003-06-10 04:12 PM


thank you i wasnt quite sure cuz its the first ive ver written like that....
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