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Warm, Pink Flesh
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Warm, Pink Flesh |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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Fingers wrap Warm, pink flesh I, in tempt Do not protest You cannot Hurt me My boldness Prompts pressure My eyes tell you You will not Take from me Short of too far Pressure gone Imprints blaze On warm, pink flesh To this day It haunts my dreams That and my own Stupidity (6/10/03) [This message has been edited by Susan Caldwell (06-10-2003 02:34 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write/read,,, Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I am awestruck of your immense talent! |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Ice and fire? Proper poetic elements. Not bad . . . w.g. \\ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Yes, yes, yes! Two questions those who have gone through abuse ask....why did they do it and why did I take it? Very, very excellent writing, Susan  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
such brilliance cannot be kept back here! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Boy I sure wish I had written this Susan, but you speak for us better than I ever could. Excellent write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent...James |
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