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Light of the sun (for Karilea)
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Light of the sun (for Karilea) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Light of the sun (For Karilea) Your voice has not touched me your eyes are far away in the green but I hear you from a distance bright as a lamp sharp as a point in silent tongue you reach me you awaken my eyes drowsy with dream and I watch you build castles with words like sticks and stones unblinking you are endless and gather me wide-eyed and blanketed I curl into the ease of your summer into the sunned fabric of your warmth. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thank you Karilea for being you for being unbelievably and remarkably you. Maree  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree...what a wonderful tribute to a fine lady. I think you are both incredible poets and friends.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
I curl into the ease of your summer into the sunned fabric of your warmth. She will love this. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Yes, Maree, this is indeed a fitting tribute... nicely done. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Maree, not only is this one hellova fine piece of writing!!!!!---but it is sure to make the Sun shine even more brightly!  Loves 'n hugs to two fine poetesses! Linda |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Outstanding write! And to one such as she...Truly a gift. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maree, our sweet Sunshine Lady is going to love this!!!! It is so like her, isn't it? Always there in the distance....watching and shining upon us..... There to help when needed and give warmth. this is beautiful, sweet Lady.  Hugs Ethel |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Maree, my friend, when words fail? A poem is born. /pip/Forum79/HTML/003447.html My thanks...don't quite seem enough. I'll be back. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Martie, Seymour, Cpat, Earth Angel, Wranx, and Ethel...... Thank you for stopping by, for your lovely replies and comments and especially for helping me celebrate our Precious Sunshine... Karilea. this line "build castles with words like sticks and stones" was given to me by Karilea in a conversation which I somehow got wrong. It should have been I think..."Build a castle with words from sticks and stones." Is that correct Karilea? Anyway credit goes to Karilea Thanks Sunshinygirl.Karilea...no words are needed m'friend. Hugs and love. [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (06-10-2003 05:59 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think we were talking about sticks and stones, how we were riddled with the normal teenage problems of kids and meanness, that sort of thing...and I think we decided that we had gone ahead and built castles with those sticks and stones we had received from childhood. Then I told you, now, there's a line you could use in a poem... and voila. You did! I'm STILL grinning...  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A beautiful poem, Maree...why doesn't that surprise me?  We've all been blessed by the radiance of the Sun and you describe it better than most can...  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
A beautiful gift from the beautiful and gifted to the beautiful and gifted..try saying that 5 times fast |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Darn, I thought I could keep her all to myself. What a selfish poet I am. Beautiful thoughts about beautiful lady! Patricia |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Maree, It is equally "sunny" here! An awesome tribute indeed. Well done. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is soooooooooo beautiful, I can tell Karilea will always hold this close to heart as your friendship is so special to every one of us and the light of your eyes seems to cast from miles and oceans apart! (kiss on cheek) Yay, I just love this, sweet friend, you both are special, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maree, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful! a great write for a great lady, by a great lady! |
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