And that's my dream........ (repost ,revised)

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Open Poetry #26

And that's my dream........ (repost ,revised)

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-06-10 10:17 AM

Take me tonight,
on a magic carpet ride,

through the moonlit skyway's oasis of stars,

we'll sail nearby eternity's door,
destination need not be known,

touch down below on the glorious green,

picnic at midnight,

just you and me,

naked and free,

running barefoot, laughing
through fields and fields of wildflowers

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-06-10 10:25 AM

nice dream.... hope you find a way to make it come true for you...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-06-10 10:33 AM

Lovely just lovely.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-06-10 12:38 PM

thanks guys,
sometimes its better left in the dream state, but then again, its nice once in a while when it lands and makes a rare
appearance

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2003-06-10 01:30 PM

LOL... well now it would be an appearance would it not? as the line says naked and free would I am sure garner a good deal of attention and one could cal that making an appearance for sure..

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

5 posted 2003-06-10 11:40 PM

Wow..powerful and I can picture the entire scenario in my mind and heart!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-06-10 11:55 PM

Hey Michele - can I have that dream too?

What a dream . . . absolutely precious
xxoo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-06-11 02:29 AM

wow! You dream on!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2003-06-11 06:48 AM

thanks for reading
yes sue, you may borrow this dream - its a clasic of mine

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2003-06-11 06:51 AM

bboy, now u know, why i cling to it all this time.....
cpat, yes naked and free.....what better way

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