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Tug of War |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Shells decorate the shoreline, both embraced and forsaken by the giving ocean, I am pulled in towards you, only to dissolve at your entrance, as you've abandonned me. I grasp to make sense of this finding little insight from shells, as they answer in an elusive language. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-10-2003 09:00 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Michele - have you been reading my heart - my mind - my soul and well - get outta myhead Lady! God I have missed you here . . . I know this - you know I do that elusive language - grrrrr brilliant Michele - as always xxoo |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done Inked... enjoyed I listened to the shells by placing them close to an open ear but heard only the rush of blood that echoed that which had run so hot in veins of us Sea shells it seems are hollow in voice much like the words I use to describe you [This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (06-10-2003 09:03 AM).] |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I listened to the shells by placing them close to an open ear but heard only the rush of blood that echoed that which had run so hot in veins of us Sea shells it seems are hollow in voice much like the words I use to describe us call it yours......please and post....... we do hear what we want to hear tho , dont we, shells or no shells thanks, sue, yes, elusive to the core they are |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
a passing thought on reading your poem not much more than that in form or style... why don't you take it... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nicely written!!!! Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - listen to the shell, it'll share it's words with you... BC |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thank you, Bill, i listen, on a clear day ,it all comes home  |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nice |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Shells decorate the shoreline, both embraced and forsaken by the giving ocean what a lovely start to a beautifully penned poem... much enjoyed... shells, yep, elusive they are it has been a while since I read you and I am pleased to have come by today Thanks Regards sudhir |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Your poem fits the title perfectly, and I agree, there is something in those little shells that speak to each of us... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanksd guys, glad you enjoyed, glad u see the shells too |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
awesome my fellow fishy, dont get lost in the waves |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
inkedgoddess,the shell,post your pic |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Another picture painted nicely with words. The seashore brings back many memories of long summer days at the beach. Oh where have those days gone. Rockaway, now and forever in my mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks again kids...... raf.....we gotta get lost in the waves, its part of the fish curse/blessing you know... bboy, as always its a pleasure, thanks dixie, glad to see you popping in all week |
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