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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-06-10 08:43 AM



Even though I may seem invisible,
I am touched
by the mist of thoughts
that float towards me,
gently lifting me for one more day.

M

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Cpat Hair
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Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-06-10 08:45 AM


Invisible? hmmm... not quite, I still see the glimmer of your light though you try to hide it from time to time under a basket you turn upside down over it in hopes of keeping it safe.


littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2003-06-10 08:46 AM


Maureen:

me too - isnt it amazing how you just get up and go?  I once asked a friend - what doe sit take to finally make you go:

babble babble -padded room ready for the loony bin?  I figure if I am not there yet -I am not suppossed to be - nor you
great write - always are
missed you
xxoo

QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
3 posted 2003-06-10 08:50 AM


terrifically written,,,

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
4 posted 2003-06-10 08:54 AM


yes, sometimes hanging by a thread, barely, but here
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