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ctowen
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0 posted 2003-06-10 03:26 AM


Before it begins,
  starting ends,
    a soul is sold.
  Release the tears,
    unleash the fears,
      let memories hold.

  Lay them down
    to the ground
      to dirt that's cold.
    Here to there,
      about anywhere
        so we are told.

    To get around,
      endlessly bound
        is turning old.
      Miles and miles,
        miles and miles
          of empty road.

      Let rest in peace,
        today to cease
          as thunder rolled ...
        pending rain,
          undying pain
            this heaven's load.

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure.   -   C. Belville 02

© Copyright 2003 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-06-10 03:48 AM


beautiful
garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-06-10 11:37 AM


This is a very good poem. Beautifully
written, too. Back to the top, so it will get noticed more.  :heart;
Hugs  
Ethel

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Gaia
3 posted 2003-06-10 11:54 AM


peace to you too, dear friend
yes
let loose the binds
and live

Brad Majors
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4 posted 2003-06-10 02:22 PM


nice!
Selina
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5 posted 2003-06-10 05:51 PM


Very nice, I enjoyed it very much.
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passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-06-14 05:42 AM


just had to come read again
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