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such frustration
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such frustration |
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Chris- Member
since 2003-06-09
Posts 52 |
lonely won't someone hold me burning on the inside in a bath full of ice i just drank a quart of insecticide to try and cure my lice i don't think i was rightfully perscribed i never learned this languauge of yours so now i have to die a simple mistake such hopelessness why is life like this why does it give and take unfairly i spent my life trying to get here and now i die whatever..... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I know this frustration you talk of. Awesome poem Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Good job on this one, frustration is nice to write about. Yay!  |
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Chris- Member
since 2003-06-09
Posts 52 |
thanks alot i don't actually not know the english language but life is strangely cruel sometimes and i just tried to portray one of those times |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
I know this feeling too. Good write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you're not alone here with this feeling |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
so sad, so sad.... I feel you. Gotta admit, my favorite line was this: ================= whatever... ================= for me that really sums up the frustration- can't do anything, but say 'whatever'... www.heybroproductions.com |
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