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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2003-06-09 05:33 PM



~*~

As shadows slip
down weeping walls,
in shadows dark I cower.
I sink to depths,
not known before,
in this my darkest hour.

Has Light of God
abandoned me,
and banished me to Hell?
No longer can,
I hear the sounds,
Of Heaven's tolling Bell.

Demons yowl,
and wrench and yank,
at this, my vanquished soul.
My seeping blood,
stains tattered veils,
as Evil takes its toll.

A brilliant Light
lit up the cell, of this,
my sinner's prison.
An angel spoke,
right to my heart,
"Your soul will soon be risen."

"How can that be?
For I have sinned,
and turned my back on God.
I lived my life
for no one else,
and tromped on sinking sod."

"Fear not your death,
for it will bring,
about a new rebirth.
So you may spread
the Words of God,
on Love and Joy and Mirth!"

~*~







[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (06-09-2003 08:43 PM).]

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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-06-09 05:35 PM


nice  
Earth Angel
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Brad ~

Thank you. :amen:

Love and Light,
EA


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3 posted 2003-06-09 05:45 PM


very nice EA and its especially chilling because of some of the songs I'm listening to right now anyways ,good work keep up the
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4 posted 2003-06-09 06:01 PM


well done!
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(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, angels are always guiding us and they will help our children find our way through the dark and reach to the light above! (sigh) You speak with such compassion and wisdom, sweet friend, this is wonderfully enlightening, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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6 posted 2003-06-09 09:34 PM


Ah yes, lovely sweet poetess. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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7 posted 2003-06-09 09:43 PM


Linda, a very humbling and well written
poem.  He will have noticed and read these
words.

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8 posted 2003-06-09 10:01 PM


WOWZA! Those first three stanzas are powerful! Well done!!!
Patricia
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9 posted 2003-06-09 10:32 PM


EA,

Did you know I needed this or did He tell you?

I shall remember my prayers this evening!

Beautiful.

Patricia  

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10 posted 2003-06-09 10:36 PM


Linda, this is so beautiful.
I love it...
Hugs  
Ethel

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Patricia ~

Something tells me that tonight you are going to sleep the peaceful sleep of angels and that all your dreams will be sweet ones.

Night-night, Dear One,
EA


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12 posted 2003-06-09 10:46 PM


Ethel ~

Thank you, Dear Girl of Gary!

Sweet dreams!
Linda

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13 posted 2003-06-09 11:02 PM


Isn't it nice how things work out with God?

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

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14 posted 2003-06-09 11:08 PM


skyshine ~

Sometimes I wonder where these poems come from! One minute I'm looking at a blank screen, and then voila!

I'm one who has never turned my back on God. When I have gone through difficult times, I need Him even more! That is not the best time to cut off my life-line!

Luvin' hugs,
EA

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15 posted 2003-06-09 11:12 PM


Earth Angel...Wonderful words that speak the voice of the Holy Spirit. It is God's greatest desire that every man might know this rebirth. ***Ivy Rose
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16 posted 2003-06-09 11:15 PM


Ivy Rose ~

Your thoughtful response was soul-warming.

Sleep well!
EA

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17 posted 2003-06-09 11:44 PM


Linda - your talent shows in what you write. I'm hoping that this is one of your skills, not showing sadness from within but only writing about it.

BC

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18 posted 2003-06-10 04:29 AM


wow! you rock!
Earth Angel
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19 posted 2003-06-10 08:52 AM


BC ~

OMW, I'd never turn my back on God!--and believe you me!--I've been truly tried & tested!!!!****!!!! He has been my salvation through all of my trials!

You are such a caring soul!

Thank you for your wonderful endorsement of my writing!

Mornin' hugs,
EA

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20 posted 2003-06-10 08:53 AM


Passing shadows ~

--so do you!

Huggums,
EA

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21 posted 2003-06-11 04:24 PM


As he promised...he will never leave you nor forsake you...James
Earth Angel
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Chris ~

I don't know how I managed to miss 6 replies! I apologize for getting back to you so late!--but I am thanking you and the other five poets now!

Warm hugs,
EA

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23 posted 2003-06-11 04:37 PM


James ~

Thank you for bringing this poem back up! I just noticed that I had missed 6 replies--which I am about to respond to!

Luvin' hugs,
EA

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Edder ~

Thank you!

Warm hugs,
EA

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25 posted 2003-06-11 04:40 PM


Noah ~

I have had dark days in my life, but I have never shunned God's Light! That is when I need it the most!

Love and Light,
Linda

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26 posted 2003-06-11 04:41 PM


Chris ~

I am truly touched by your loving words...

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

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27 posted 2003-06-11 04:43 PM


Balladeer ~

"WOWSA" is one hellova WOWSA reply! Thank you Dear Balls of Deer!

Huggums,
EA

Earth Angel
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28 posted 2003-06-11 04:51 PM


Magnus ~

I've been having trouble keeping up with my replies and I missed yours!---and it was warm and kind! Thank you! But you needn't worry! I've been a good little angel and I was just spreading my poetic wings!


Linda

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29 posted 2003-06-11 10:28 PM


love and light and the angel shines through,once again
Earth Angel
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30 posted 2003-06-12 08:45 AM


inkedgoddess ~

That was a lovely reply! Thank you very much!

~ May love & Light always be with you...
EA

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31 posted 2003-06-12 08:54 AM


This was totally wonderful, from beginning to end was enjoyed, you took from me feelings of reflection and thought, you brought in God's angel and the Devil in act, showed me sorry and the awakening of your soul to truth, the cold and dark of the shadows, the light and warmth of belief, for all this thank you.

Sincerely
Rick

Earth Angel
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32 posted 2003-06-12 09:48 AM


Rick ~

Your indepth and thoughtful response to my poem is very much appreciated! A reply such as yours adds greatly to my pleasure of writing! Thank you, Dear One!  

Love & Eternal Light,
Linda

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