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Broken
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since 2000-03-12
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The woods

0 posted 2003-06-09 04:47 PM



DISINHIBITION

When your mind is all
And all is lost
Then your all
Were yours to lose
Now you can't
And will no more
Lose yourself
'Cause you are lost

You trigger every button
Every on switch you can find
But the red light's still flashing
In your desperate, staring eyes

Revealing
Every weakness
Every feeling
That you hide
Are the teardrops
As they fall
And the shiver
In your hands

Regardless if their intentions
And your doings all were good
Your time in institutions
Have just left you were you stood

You're still out there
In the dark
Begging for a pound
Or a pence
In hope that
It'll do
To buy a ticket
Back to sense

© Copyright 2003 Jay Hartson - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-06-09 04:49 PM


Awesome poem. A lot of people out there feel like this.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
2 posted 2003-06-09 05:05 PM


It captures well, I like it.
gyiel marlok
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since 2003-06-08
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OHIO
3 posted 2003-06-09 05:09 PM


broken,sweet write
Lethe
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Blackforrest
4 posted 2003-06-10 05:10 PM


Nice one, my friend, enjoyed.

Lethe


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