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RedStoneEB
Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2003-06-09 03:27 PM


im not really feeling great in my single life but i live with it hoping yes hoping for something to change will heres a poem ok i try i really do

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Sometimes i find I’m floating
Through that life of painfulness
Into my own world I flow
Right into darkness I go

I search for days through my endless mind
Trying to find that Inner Light inside
To guide me back onto the path of life

You see me walk along the lane
Looking weak and lame
Yet inside I call out to you

I often try too hard to find
The thing my soul seeks most
A companion to call my own

From somewhere deep inside
There must be meaning to my life
Something to call my destiny
Before I cease to exist in this world




[This message has been edited by RedStoneEB (06-09-2003 03:28 PM).]

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crimson tear
Member
since 2003-06-07
Posts 76
Massachusetts
1 posted 2003-06-09 03:34 PM


oh boy i've been there. i can definitely relate. keep it up. good stuff
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-06-10 03:44 PM


Keep looking...others are looking...James
nobody
Junior Member
since 2003-05-19
Posts 43

3 posted 2003-06-10 04:07 PM


keep lookin dont give uip theres always someone out there
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