a daughter I've yet to have

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Open Poetry #26

a daughter I've yet to have

Chris-
Member

since 2003-06-09

Posts 52

0 posted 2003-06-09 01:51 PM

the fire's sun burns the morning's dew
igniting the icy resin
and bleaching the sky blue
from dark comes the light
as once was in the times we used to fight
for the life of our daughter
born in this winter of slaughter,
ash stains her face
as tears of fear wash her sane,
let live, let die, let go of this place
to save my pretty child from her pain

*I'm 17 so i have no idea what its like to have and fight for a kid but this is the emotion that I imagine one would go through during a divorce or custody thing*

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2003-06-09 02:13 PM

Wow! Pacts a powerful punch! You write beyond your years! Well written!-- painful to read but with an important message!

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

2 posted 2003-06-09 02:21 PM

yes a good write, I imagine this is what it feels like, may I never feel this.

Jason

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-06-09 02:41 PM

This is the truth. Many people in my family have gone through this. Awesome poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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