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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-06-09 07:09 AM



Close this war, i fight so weakly

feebly grounded by full force fist

named love.


Hold me tighter, til what i want to say

escapes like natural breath

and not before.


Gravelly grate my skin that cries

peel to release a new barb wire

survive this burning.


Dig up my voice from early grave

wash til it runs clear

and your selfishness is the sound.

[This message has been edited by gemjop (06-09-2003 07:11 AM).]

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AniKay83
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1 posted 2003-06-09 07:28 AM


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Hold me tighter, til what i want to say

escapes like natural breath

and not before.
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Very, very cool. Can't express that enough.

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garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-06-09 08:16 AM


Hold me tighter, til what i want to say

escapes like natural breath

and not before.


Ouch!!!  Gemma, this is so powereful!!
I like it.  
Heart hugs to youi. little Lady   :hugs    
Ethel


Psssttt!!!   It's good to see you here so early!!  See you later!!  


Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2003-06-09 08:23 AM


gemjop
Nicely done, enjoyed the read.

gemjop
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4 posted 2003-06-09 10:33 AM


thanks for the kind words.

i'm down.    and confused   and angry

not good eh?

much love, gem xxx

Aenimal
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5 posted 2003-06-09 03:57 PM


Hey first round is on me as long as its not Guiness..eew
Brad Majors
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6 posted 2003-06-09 05:49 PM


Brilliant!
littlewing
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7 posted 2003-06-09 07:31 PM


Damnn Gem - gravelly grate my skin . . .

I want to write like that . . .

this is (if I could swear I would)
amazing . . . as they all are

and umm Raph - what exactly is WRONG with guiness now? hmmm?  Put a shot of Jamieson in it - drop it in the glass and chug - bittersweet
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (06-09-2003 07:32 PM).]

inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2003-06-10 08:58 AM



Close this war, i fight so weakly

feebly grounded by full force fist

named love.

it is like this, isnt it?

QjQ
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9 posted 2003-06-10 09:08 AM


very good write/read,,,  enjoyed....

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

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