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Black Swan
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 165
on the moon

0 posted 2003-06-09 01:40 AM


spinning around
my head doesnt know
how to bend
this luxury
of knowing how to pretend
is falling apart
aching to smart
shameful musings
clutter this place
remember my face
doesn't know how to see
doesn't know how to be free
fake this lawful commentary
wait until my heart blankets us all
envelopes
all the sorrow
absorb like I am a sponge
never releasing the tension
it all comes undone
can't stop this train
i'm speeding toward thie station
the tracks are flying loose
i'm going to fast
speed demon
flailing
manipulating
can't stop this encore
of destruction
i'm coming unglued
i'm bursting at the seems
i'm full



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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-06-09 01:44 AM


Talia:

me too . . .

need some stitching I do -
we both do

mann my hair was whipping with this ride

missed you
xxoo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-06-09 04:49 AM


wow! yep! I know the feeling.
Deep_Inside
Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377
i can't stop hiding
3 posted 2003-06-09 11:58 AM


hi i llike it
Black Swan
Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165
on the moon
4 posted 2003-06-10 01:43 AM


lol hi Matt, nice response! "hi i like it"...lol ttyl man ~Talia
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