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Chris-
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0 posted 2003-06-09 12:12 PM


it happened in the dead of day
the trees stood silent
the wind breatheless as always
and no one came to save her

sleeping amongst the dead
to weary to move the bodies
the battlefield was now her bed
while'st their blood drowned the cities

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1 posted 2003-06-09 12:49 PM


very chilling imagery here,
appropriate for the subject matter

Welcome to Passions, Chris.  

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2 posted 2003-06-09 12:54 PM


Welcome to PIP Chris!

amazing entrance
if this is the first of what
we will see
I cannot wait for the next . . .
xxoo

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3 posted 2003-06-09 04:56 AM


wow
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4 posted 2003-06-09 05:47 AM


I offer a very warm welcome to you, so I might ease the chill of your words.

A very enjoyable read.
Welcome, welcome.

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5 posted 2003-06-09 09:11 AM



A very solemn, vivid write.  Welcome to Passions, Chris!  Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

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6 posted 2003-06-09 09:14 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Great imagery in this first post.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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7 posted 2003-06-09 09:55 AM


Welcome to Passions !!
Enjoyed your first post.
Have fun here.

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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8 posted 2003-06-09 09:38 PM




(big hugggsssssssss) Oh Chris, this is very chilling imagery in this powerful debut, sweet friend, this feeling is ever too common and I hope soon we can just go about solution-making the easy way, God Bless You Welcome to Passions, sweet Chris, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by all your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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