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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-06-08 07:40 PM





~This one means so much to me~
*In the loving hands of friends, our tears are held until we can breathe again on our own*


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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1 posted 2003-06-08 09:14 PM


I love the way you worked this, well done!

And now she's in me, always with me, tiny dancer in my hand ~ Bernie Taupin

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2 posted 2003-06-08 09:28 PM


I have held the tears of many friends..but alas alone my tears fall into my own hand.
Patricia
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3 posted 2003-06-08 09:48 PM


Oh Marge, this is wonderful...the visuals and the thoughts.  Gosh, I wish I had someone to catch my tears.

Patricia

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4 posted 2003-06-08 10:09 PM


Marge, this is beautifully written, as usual. But sad. I hope you are okay! I miss you.
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5 posted 2003-06-08 11:18 PM


The tie in of the picture and words is awesome.  Well done.  Ken
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6 posted 2003-06-09 12:28 PM


A little kindness and understanding goes a long long way.

Just beautiful Marge~

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Sigh....


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9 posted 2003-06-09 05:54 AM


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Then suddenly, it wasn't so big after all...
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Yeah... it ain't so big after all...

VIVA LA FUNK!!!
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Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2003-06-09 09:55 AM


Friends~
I thank you all so much~
This one is actually a re-work (with graphic) of a 1999 write that has played all over the world~

From the Passions In Poetry main site, this is the poem that gets the most poignant replies into my mailbox.  How wonderful to be able to reach out and touch others, miles away, through our poetry~

It's just a GREAT DAY to be a poetess~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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11 posted 2003-06-09 04:12 PM


Dear Marge:  This is so tenderly beautiful. I'm glad to know that so many people have shared this and been touched by it!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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12 posted 2003-06-09 04:13 PM


enjoy y oour read
Betty
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13 posted 2003-06-09 10:21 PM


This is sooo pretty.
Love,
Betty

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14 posted 2003-06-09 10:25 PM


Marge - my words could never share the thoughts I have except to say thank you...

BC

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15 posted 2003-06-09 10:32 PM


Marge/sis...this is beautiful in capture of a special intend...
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16 posted 2003-06-09 10:57 PM


Marge...What a breathtaking poem!!! The imagery is so outstanding and it just reaches down deep into the soul. ***Ivy Rose
Marge Tindal
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17 posted 2003-07-02 06:25 PM


Thank you friends~
These are difficult memory-days for me ... I ask your prayers of tender comfort~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com   

Marge Tindal
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18 posted 2005-09-27 02:34 PM



Jump-a- for a friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

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