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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-06-08 06:14 PM

the sky
is shedding

white

tears
are slipping off trees

quietly

the emerald threshold is lined
in June brides
walking
miles of aisles
gleaming, streaming
criers cry
tears
dispersed
in flights
of white
butterflies
vanishing
swirling,whirling
confetti pours
hazy vanilla
summertime
daydreams,

i woke to
the pRetty flOwerBoy,
always thE floweRboy,

under milky whiTe clouds
on flower wisps
i blew
and wished you
to feel
the kiss of my love,

and wonder now
did it ever touch down?

Did you even
feel me at all?

through the wish
I sent
along the open sky

one early August starlit night
when Summer and i reunited

Was it really love we felt
for those few moments?

TELL ME................

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-08-2003 06:19 PM).]

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-06-08 06:17 PM

nice write and read....

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

gyiel marlok
Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 145
OHIO

2 posted 2003-06-08 06:19 PM

inkedgoddess, are the seasons making love, this is like very slick,fill me in on what this is about please.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-06-08 06:24 PM

its about love , light and a dream, to marry the beautiful flowerboy............if only in Heaven

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-08-2003 06:29 PM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2003-06-08 06:35 PM

Dear Michele this is a wonderful write ... right after my heart. And ...love it was for sure! Otherwise you could not have written with such intensity ...
Love, Margherita

(palepink toenails! haha!)

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2003-06-08 08:30 PM

nice write

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-06-08 08:40 PM

ahhh Michele . . .

loved this the first time I read it
always wondering and wishing . . .
we know the answer . . . but do they?
very confusing

I love the falling thoughts in this
and your request . . . much needed indeed
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (06-08-2003 08:40 PM).]

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-06-08 08:52 PM

So many questions always questions when do we get our answers

Canon_D_111
Member

since 2003-06-04

Posts 58
New York USA

8 posted 2003-06-08 09:17 PM

Robert....

great read

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