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Margherita
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Barefoot
Freedom hits me
with unknown power
while I run barefoot
in the white sand
on a golden shore,
imprinting tracks of joy
for just a fleeting moment.
With a passionate caress
the rhythmic waves
read the secret signs
and store them safely
in the depth of time.
The sun blissfully plays
with the drops of water
splashed into my face
each drop a kiss from You.
Distance doesn’t hurt
I feel the whole world
sings to me of You.
You told the water
to softly kiss my skin,
you told the sun
to rock me on her rays,
you told the sand grains
to caress my bare feet,
you told the breeze
to carry your scent to me.
Love has found its way
into my yearning heart.
We perform life’s dance
in sweetest harmony
dwelling in each other
and in all the elements.
Margherita
© Copyright 2003 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 06-08-2003 03:12 PM       View Profile for QjQ   Email QjQ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for QjQ

oh my~~  this is just terrific with the pic and words so nice,,  i felt like i was there..

Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ

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2 posted 06-08-2003 04:02 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

I agree with Glenn....totally.  Your visual
graphics blended well with the exceptional
writing.  Nice Poem..
Startime55
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3 posted 06-08-2003 04:04 PM       View Profile for Startime55   Email Startime55   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Startime55

You brought back, vividly, wonderful memories of hours spend walking along the sandy shore of the Atlantic coast...How I miss the feel, smell and taste of those sunfilled beaches....Magnificent writing...

[This message has been edited by Startime55 (06-08-2003 04:05 PM).]

Aenimal
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4 posted 06-08-2003 04:13 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

Ah barefoot on the mediterranean shore..sigh miss that. Ma io non lo so come si po giocare calcio supra la spiaga sensi scarpe!
Bill Charles
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Margherita - a most lovely writing. Sand between ones toes on the beach, just beautifully written...

BC
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Pretty.

Great poem.  It all works perfectly together.

Thank you.
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Somewhere in time~


7 posted 06-08-2003 05:04 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Very very nice..made me want to kick my shoes off and head for the beach.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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(smiles) Oh Margherita, I just love this, sweet friend, I want to move to the beach soooooo much so I can play in the sand and embrace each sunny day with relaxation and fun! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, guess the mountains will have to do for now, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

inkedgoddess
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9 posted 06-08-2003 05:54 PM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inkedgoddess

barefoot goes nice with red toenails
love this feeling
NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise


10 posted 06-08-2003 05:58 PM       View Profile for NewEnglandlazurlu   Email NewEnglandlazurlu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NewEnglandlazurlu

You describe barefoot and love so well. I loved the picture as it was just perfect for your words.

How I long to be at the beach ... if it would just stop raining and warm up here.

Hugs, Marti
MikeFessel
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11 posted 06-08-2003 06:10 PM       View Profile for MikeFessel   Email MikeFessel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MikeFessel

Margherita,
Oh this is so, so beautiful. How is it you can see the world this way? I yearn to so badly, but I never can...

           Mike
JamesMichael
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12 posted 06-08-2003 06:14 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Wow...this is silky smooth....two thumbs up and five stars and a hug and a kiss...James
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13 posted 06-08-2003 06:44 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

The ocean makes for such beautiful metaphor.. I love it, a lot.
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YES! this is absolutely beautiful imagery, and that picture? I want to run on that beach.
littlewing
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Margherita:

I dont know if you were speaking of someone special but this sure spoke to me
It reminds me of all the gifts we are bestowed upon us without even realizing it
Made me feel grateful for the rain today you did
Thank you
and what a dream that would be to be on that beach . . .
I miss it
xxoo  
Ericc
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16 posted 06-09-2003 07:17 PM       View Profile for Ericc   Email Ericc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ericc

So very beautiful Margherita.
Love,
Eric
Sunshine
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17 posted 06-09-2003 07:33 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

The sun blissfully plays
with the drops of water
splashed into my face
each drop a kiss from You.

~*~

From this point forward...it only gets better.

Hugs...
Margherita
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18 posted 06-10-2003 07:51 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Thank you my friends for reading and "leaving your foot- and heartprints" together with mine on the white sand on that beautiful beach ... it is a great vision of peace and joy to imagine all of us there breathing deeply, enjoying the sun, life, friendship ..... and creativity!
Much love, Margherita
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19 posted 03-16-2004 09:29 AM       View Profile for muted   Email muted   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for muted

the absolute freedom in this, bliss
 
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