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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 Barefoot Freedom hits me with unknown power while I run barefoot in the white sand on a golden shore, imprinting tracks of joy for just a fleeting moment. With a passionate caress the rhythmic waves read the secret signs and store them safely in the depth of time. The sun blissfully plays with the drops of water splashed into my face each drop a kiss from You. Distance doesn’t hurt I feel the whole world sings to me of You. You told the water to softly kiss my skin, you told the sun to rock me on her rays, you told the sand grains to caress my bare feet, you told the breeze to carry your scent to me. Love has found its way into my yearning heart. We perform life’s dance in sweetest harmony dwelling in each other and in all the elements. Margherita |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
oh my~~ this is just terrific with the pic and words so nice,, i felt like i was there.. Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I agree with Glenn....totally. Your visual graphics blended well with the exceptional writing. Nice Poem.. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
You brought back, vividly, wonderful memories of hours spend walking along the sandy shore of the Atlantic coast...How I miss the feel, smell and taste of those sunfilled beaches....Magnificent writing... [This message has been edited by Startime55 (06-08-2003 04:05 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Ah barefoot on the mediterranean shore..sigh miss that. Ma io non lo so come si po giocare calcio supra la spiaga sensi scarpe! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - a most lovely writing. Sand between ones toes on the beach, just beautifully written... BC |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Pretty. Great poem. It all works perfectly together. Thank you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nice..made me want to kick my shoes off and head for the beach. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Margherita, I just love this, sweet friend, I want to move to the beach soooooo much so I can play in the sand and embrace each sunny day with relaxation and fun! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, guess the mountains will have to do for now, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
barefoot goes nice with red toenails love this feeling |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
You describe barefoot and love so well. I loved the picture as it was just perfect for your words. How I long to be at the beach ... if it would just stop raining and warm up here. Hugs, Marti |
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MikeFessel Member
since 2003-04-19
Posts 321Brooklyn, NYC, USA |
Margherita, Oh this is so, so beautiful. How is it you can see the world this way? I yearn to so badly, but I never can... Mike |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wow...this is silky smooth....two thumbs up and five stars and a hug and a kiss...James |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
The ocean makes for such beautiful metaphor.. I love it, a lot. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 YES! this is absolutely beautiful imagery, and that picture? I want to run on that beach. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Margherita: I dont know if you were speaking of someone special but this sure spoke to me It reminds me of all the gifts we are bestowed upon us without even realizing it Made me feel grateful for the rain today you did Thank you and what a dream that would be to be on that beach . . . I miss it xxoo |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
So very beautiful Margherita. Love, Eric |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The sun blissfully plays with the drops of water splashed into my face each drop a kiss from You. ~*~ From this point forward...it only gets better. Hugs...  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you my friends for reading and "leaving your foot- and heartprints" together with mine on the white sand on that beautiful beach ... it is a great vision of peace and joy to imagine all of us there breathing deeply, enjoying the sun, life, friendship ..... and creativity! Much love, Margherita   |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
the absolute freedom in this, bliss |
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