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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-06-08 01:57 PM



Why

I saw a white bird
against a black sky
and heard birds
singing in the darkness
looking for answers
in the question
why


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Larry C
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1 posted 2003-06-08 02:06 PM


Because we love you...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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2 posted 2003-06-08 02:16 PM


           

I felt like you might could use those, because this felt kind of sad.

Patricia
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3 posted 2003-06-08 02:26 PM


Unfortunately, some answers are never found here.  I wanted to respond now and then chew on this verse this afternoon.  I think I feel an inspiration coming on here from your words.  Thanks.


Patricia

Ericc
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4 posted 2003-06-09 07:19 PM


Often...the questions are more important than the answers.
Beautiful.
Eric

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