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My Darkest Hour
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My Darkest Hour |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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My Darkest Hour would it be easier for you if I hated you I can not and anger was something that had a hold of me filling me so nothing else could enter so anger had to go too the only thing left would be forgiveness and I do not possess the will of angels so I can not forgive there are some things beyond my forgiveness some hurts never heal I do not love you anymore and I do not want to be your friend you know why I don’t need to remind you there are things that are bigger than me and that I now know do not flatter yourself with the thoughts that you can flatter me yet, there was a time and there was a time you had no problem living a life without me when I was there it is just now I have learned how to live so please I beg you leave me alone so I can live [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (06-08-2003 01:37 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
YES! I second that! and I will back it up if I have to! (I'm not so far away) You just let me know if he doesn't hear you good  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Knowing your work, I know the importance of this being four times as long as your usual poem.....and this: I have learned how to live so please I beg you leave me alone so I can live .....says things about closed doors, and doors that are closed but perhaps not latched.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
/pip/Forum79/HTML/000359.html nuff said |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Helen, At times like those one needs a friend... The Advantage of a Broken Heart If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
and there was a time you had no problem living a life without me when I was there it is just now I have learned how to live so please I beg you leave me alone so I can live Helen, this is so familiar to me....from my own personal past. Sometimes, someone doesn't want what they have, until they've lost it. I guess it hurts their pride to know they have lost. He didn't want me or need me in the way I wanted, apparently...but he didn't want me to move on in my life with someone else. My deceased husband would be exactly this way now about me and my Honey-Love if he were still around. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
What a powerful write! A plea of this strength must be heard by the intended recipient. Oh, the power!  Patricia |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
this tugs at my heart hope he listens and feels |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I really loved this, hope he hears you and goes away.Well written and an honest write. Jason |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
 Geeeezzzz...Did you HAVE to make my heart cry too?  You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
let me live, let me live,pretty damn good |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. [This message has been edited by Larry C (06-09-2003 10:49 AM).] |
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