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JP
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since 1999-05-25
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Loomis, CA

0 posted 2003-06-08 09:32 AM



Marco! Polo!
Marco! Polo!
Marco! Polo!
Incessantly.
Slick floors
water stained carpets
soggy clothes
mountains of laundry.
Skimming, vacuuming
testing and adjusting,
endless work.
This is the price,
but a cost gladly borne,
to see the smiles,
hear the laughter,
feel the joy,
of the children in my pool.

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

© Copyright 2003 JP Burns - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-06-08 11:11 AM


I remember many days in the pool, at the lake or at the beach. It was fun playing Marco Polo. I loved this read.

Cold hands means a warm heart

bslicker
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2 posted 2003-06-08 11:24 AM


very cool,,
and it's all worth it isn't JP

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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3 posted 2003-06-08 10:58 PM



Enjoyed this look into simple pleasures

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-06-08 11:00 PM


Much enjoyed JP!
Now if it would only warm up!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-06-09 05:16 AM


i remember
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