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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-06-08 07:02 AM


Silky Streams

In my wildest dream I
imagined myself with you.
In silky streams
we swam as two.

In golden pond 'neath
graceful waterfall
I kissed your lips,
I was enthralled.

You could make my
dreams come true.
In silky streams
I'll swim with you.

JamesLee
June07
2003

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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2003-06-08 07:17 AM


I wouldn't mind some of those silky streams. They would remind me of your poetry.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160
Missouri
2 posted 2003-06-08 09:10 AM


Very beautiful...I can feel the silkiness.


Patricia

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-06-08 09:28 AM


Very smooth...lovely James.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
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just out of reach
4 posted 2003-06-08 10:19 AM


Mmmm, this sounds wonderful. Good one James! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2003-06-08 10:35 AM


Yes, very smooth James M.

*S
M

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