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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-07 11:42 PM


So slow..
your hand runs across the jean that
circles around my leg.
The quiet way that you veiw my skin
as a preditor to prey..
In my seldom attempt to ease your anger,
I let my anguish sway..

I miss you, love..
Even when the flowers age..



© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
skyshine
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1 posted 2003-06-07 11:44 PM


Welcome to Passions! Good work!

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

icebox
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2 posted 2003-06-07 11:44 PM


Touching lines.  I like your style.  Welcome to PIP.
the_loner_23
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3 posted 2003-06-07 11:44 PM


Welcome to Passions!!!!!! This was an awesome introduction piece. It was sad but I enjoyed it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
4 posted 2003-06-07 11:46 PM


Wow, you guys are speedy! Thanks for the hearty welcome, that's so rare for boards..but nice.
littlewing
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5 posted 2003-06-08 02:58 AM


Kaoru:

Welcome to PIP!

speedy - cant blink an eye in here
you will love it . . .

nice entrance
xxoo

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-06-08 03:47 AM


beautiful!
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7 posted 2003-06-08 11:56 AM


a very poignant post
WELCOME to Passions! hope you enjoy the variety here

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8 posted 2003-06-08 12:00 PM


enjoyed
Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2003-06-08 06:03 PM




(big hugggsssssss) This is a very heartfelt debut, sweet friend, I send heart hugs your way and hope now all is in full bloom once again! Welcome to Passions, sweet Kaoru, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kaoru, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Sunshine
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10 posted 2003-06-09 09:32 AM


Kaoru, Welcome to Passions!  Short, concise writing sometimes leaves very detailed images in our minds...just as you have done here.  I'm going to enjoy reading your poetry.

Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
11 posted 2003-06-09 09:36 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS MEGHAN!
Beautiful, concise first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

AniKay83
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12 posted 2003-06-09 12:16 PM


Very, very nice. I'd copy and paste my favorite parts but I'd just be re-posting the whole thing!
Welcome to Passions!

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