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Things Are looking Up
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Things Are looking Up |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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Your knee buckles and lying on your back in the middle of the staircase you stare at the ceiling and you think sarcastically 'things are looking up' and you start to laugh but the shaking makes your knee, twisted beneath you, hurt that much more and you're no longer shaking in laughter but in tears and in rage and you'd curse your luck but you can't remember the last time you had any |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
 what is up with metallica and saint anger....?god, do rockers HAVE to lose their edge when they get rich and fat......more like saint boring |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
interesting write,,,,enjoyed... Poetry is a vision that portrays ones impressions.QjQ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Mish I laughed when i saw the commercial they're trying so hard..not just fat and commercial..married thanks qjq |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I actually find comedy in that phrase - "things are looking up" I can see you doing just that . . . but then shaking your head afterwards like I do so often wondering why . . . watch that knee . . . irony here Raph . . . xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-07-2003 11:06 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Sue you know me sarcastic to the end and self deprecating as always |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
yes . . . I do |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*giggle* |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Sue ice does nothing Dixie glad you found it funny ;p |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
he he. i'll have that phrase in mind next time i fall over. managed to slip over only last night, admittedly too drunk to be walking, theres nothing like the harsh feeling of 2 am freezing cold pavement, and a few witnesses laughing their heads off. cringe. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
You just reminded my of two great memories..one my friend Mike who thought he could jump over a picnic table in his state and landed face first with a mouthful of snow..second my friend michelle who got hammered got all decked ou in her ski gear at our chalet and decided to swoosh down the stairs and ended up in the air and on top of a table..lmao here sorry..actually thanks needed that |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
. . . well then get out the hammer and clunk it on your head . . . sorry you did this to me (I'm kidding btw) I know you lmao up there |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you're too much Raph  I love ya anyhow  |
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crimson tear Member
since 2003-06-07
Posts 76Massachusetts |
i like that. I can't count how many times i've curse my own misfortune |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
lol, falling over, always gonna make u laugh aint it. i wish ud seen me being sick and having the toilet lid come crashing down on my nose, now then u would have been laughing.  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Sue is it a silver hammer? nevermind..bang bang Dixie yes I am too much..gained some weight but thanks Crimson I stopped cursing mine and just focused on cursing in general i'm very good at it ask Sue Gem I've seen some great things in my time and as for the seat hitting you in the head i'm adding that picture in my head lol thanks! |
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